Here is my first rough draft for the KnightLab Project
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1. Who is the audience?
People who want to improve their sleep schedule and want to learn more about the different functions of sleeping. (Intended audience is College students in mind)
2. Make three suggestions so that the piece appeals and engages that audience more effectively.
- Separate the sections to be more understandable. Maybe start by explaining the sleep cycle first and then go on to the daily routine. I noticed you had the "night" section in the draft, so maybe make the distinction between day and night more clear and find the exact place to put in the sleep cycle information.
- Maybe add a section about studying and setting aside time to do schoolwork, because having a…